Rough Idea of Order of shots after changes

Order of story after changes:
Lewis and Simon are chasing each other through the woods, this time we have cut this shorter so we have more time for story.
They reach the end of the woods by the lake, Lewis and Simon Conversation, Simon tells Lewis that his wife is on a train that is about to blow up. Lewis gets angry and shoots Simon. Titles appear during the chase scene shots.
We then see Amy (Wife) on a train, hear ticking noises. See ring on her finger.
We then see a shot of a train blowing up.
Then the title Reconnaissance
If we have time left we then see Lewis walking up to a newspaper, picking it up, looking at the front page then throwing it on the floor.